Wednesday, February 2, 2011

Life in the City




     I think life in the city better than life in the country.I like the city for many reasons. In the city like my city (Jedddah) we can find everything near to us. children  can study many topics in the school. It has many university we can continue our eduction. It has many recreational places, such as park, beach, malls, amusement park, and others. There are many public service, such as hospital, library. When we want to eat or drink outside or eat any kind of food, we can because it has a lot of restaurants and coffee shop. There are many kinds of  transportation, such as cars, and trains between the cities . In  my city we can meet variety of people. Easy to find a mate. It has job opportunities. For all these reasons, in my city we have a great time.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Alaa good start but I have some advice for you. Be careful when you use a singular or plural like restaurant (restaurants), mall (malls), city(cities). It is nice to use such as but don't use it a lot it makes a reader feel boring. but well done.

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  3. Nice,
    Is there (train between the city)?

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  4. I like cities with nice beaches, so I think I would like Jeddah! I wonder if people can speak English in the hotels or restaurants...I really don't know any Arabic.

    Corrections: "Children can study many topics in school." "There are many kinds of transportation such as trains and cars between cities." (You don't need to use "the" when making general statements.)

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