Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Crime



       I think my hometown is more safety than Calgary. In Calgary, we can see homeless people. At night, some people drink alcohol a lot and walk around the city that is most be dangerous. However, in my country I did not see homeless people and no stand for drink. The police officer is work round the clock to help or prevent people; therefore, that is safer. I prefer when I live in Calgary stay home at night because it is dangerous for me and for my daughter to walk. I put all the important things in the home.

1 comment:

  1. I agree, there are some minor crimes in Calgary, but I think it's a generally safe place to live. You just have to be careful where you're walking at night. Also, good use of the semi-colon!

    Corrections: "I think my hometown is safer than Calgary." "At night, some people drink alcohol a lot and walk around the city, which is dangerous."

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